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Dream themes

Dry wry theme lines will be unsuitable
Divisions dream refines refutable
My final visions delayed
Until decisions are made
Revisions and review inscrutable

Alan Grace
28 January 2018

Daily prompt: Inscrutable

My poems seldom stay static. See: https://aaamazingphoenix.wordpress.com/2017/10/28/ch-ch-ch-changes/

Below are a number of my revisions for a previous poem.
See: https://aaamazingphoenix.wordpress.com/2018/01/27/crypto-silhouette/

The latest version is at the top.

Which version do you prefer?

 

Crypto silhouette

Birth debts dearth crypto cash silhouette
Worth less with earthquake crash pirouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a great flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth of debt crypto cash silhouette
Worth less with earthquake crash pirouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a great flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth of debt crypto cash silhouette
Worth less now earthquake crash pirouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a great flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth debt crypto crash pirouette
Worth less earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth debt crypto crash pirouette
Worth no earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth of crypto crash pirouette
Worth no earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth of crypto crash will you sweat
Worth no earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

Birth crypto market crash don’t sweat
Worth no earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

The crypto market crash don’t sweat
It’s no earthquake cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Crypto silhouette

The crypto market crash don’t sweat
It’s so clear mere cash silhouette
For heavens sake
You have to break
Eggs to make a flash omelette

Alan Grace
27 January 2018

Daily prompt: Silhouette