Strut proudly

There are two versions below of a poem (and a number of options).

Which version do you prefer?

Strut proudly

On the fridge of the Escher queen
Her grandson’s art picture was seen
On well-crafted hands
A mirrored orb stands
Reflecting headless robot’s sheen

Alan Grace
11 November 2017

EscherRobotGlobe

Alternate version:

Strut proudly

On the fridge of the Escher queen
Her grandson’s art picture was seen
On well-crafted hand
A mirrored orb stand
Reflects a headless robot’s sheen

Alan Grace
11 November 2017

Or maybe last line:

Globe reflects headless robot’s sheen

Instead of Globe maybe Ball or Sphere?

Which version do you prefer?

Poetry by committee (strutting its stuff)?

committee

Daily prompt: Strut

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