A great mistake
Oh what a great mistake
To make for goodness sake
We could not foresee
The [apostrophe] [catastrophe]
In moot fruits of the snake
Alan Grace
28 August 2018
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Maybe change last three lines in your poem Geraldine to:
but from the
fruits temptation
By biting those.
What do you think?
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